Im running all over the place were being bombed but next time i will think of were im staying because the name wasn’t that nice eather. It was stay here you get bombed, but i didn’t realise they were serious. Now were getting bombed and everyones screaming and thats when i saw it, a safety hut with people calling out to me to get in it with them. I thought then i ran to the hut but before i could get in it got blone up. Craaassh. No one but me suvived that bomb and i was scared by the sight.

3 thoughts on “Running from nightmares.

  1. What an experience!
    It made me wonder if this story was set in London in the 1940s during WWII or perhaps it’s a new Narnia adventure. You survived the experience but in a future story you might share your life after this terrible experience.
    Keep writing and sharing.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Hi Riley!

    I wonder what happened to the narrator after the end of the story. I hope they managed to survive the onslaught! The metaphor of the bombs being ‘nightmares’ in the title was interesting as well. Perhaps it could be incorporated into the descriptions of the bombs somehow?

    Great work on this and keep writing!

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