This is awkward. Me and the queen. I have a sip of tea, ahhh it taste was Phenomenal and it was the best cup i had. After that me and mum had to leave on the way home i thought to myself, im glad i did that because that was a one in a life opportunity and i just had it. That was amazing and a Phenomanel experinse and i enjoyed every bit of it. When we got home mum told me not to tell dad how fun it was, he couldn’t go because he was sick. I feel bad for him.
Hello Riley,
Tea with the Queen… it would make you feel awkward but a phenomenal cup of tea with her would help you overcome the awkwardness. What an honour!
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Hi Riley,
Your character’s poor dad, he would have been gutted to have missed out on such an amazing opportunity!
From your opening sentence, to the way the events and narrative unfolded, I thought that this piece made for an enjoyable to read. This was an interesting and very creative way to incorporate the prompt from this week.
Keep up the good work,
Anna (Team 100WC, Edinburgh)